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High stakes English language tests, such as IELTS, are increasingly being delivered on the computer.Do the advantages of computer-based testing outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience?

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Nowadays
, traditional method of taking exams have been drastically reduced by the advancement in technological fields. While there are some people who admit that a pen and paper-based
test
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 will never be replaced, others believe that technology makes the life easy, and
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 a computer-based
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 approach does not only saves time but
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 efforts. In
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 essay, we will discuss both of these issues and analyse whether an electronic machine based international language
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 have more benefits than negatives or vice-versa. There are many compelling reasons to believe that the computer-based language
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 has more cons as compared to old school style of conducting exams.
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 with, even though a lot of people across the globe have sufficient resources to give online
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, but they still prefer to appear in
written examination
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the written examination
 because they have been practicing the same style since their childhood. India,
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, citizens of the country have given written
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tests, even
 if they are renowned competitive exams
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an armed forces exam
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, other people, myself included, conceive that conducting online-exams
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 more beneficial for the people as the world is gradually shifting towards high-speed internet and technology. The Computer-based exams not only give frequent booking
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 dates and results as compared to manual checking of the hard-core papers, but it
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 helps in minimizing the errors while checking because of advanced
atificial
contrived by art rather than nature
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 intelligence
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existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
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 system. For
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an occurrence of something
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, now
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 takers can
ealsily
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
 book the give the exam twice in a week because there is no shortage of online-
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 dates. In conclusion, though the
tradional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
 ways of conducting exams would never go
cpmpletely
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
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 out of style, but I strongly recommend to gradually shift to computer-based
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test, particularly
 in case of English language tests so that people could save their valuable time.
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