More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?

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In recent times a number of people are consuming more of fast
food
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than home made meals
eventhough
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even though
they are not necessarily healthy.
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essay will discuss how
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trend is becoming unpopular because of the drawbacks,
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as poor regulation of fast
food
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joints, use of
food
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products that are high in calories. Admittedly, ready-made meals are readily available as
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its quick, saves time and energy.
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is mostly appreciated in todays world where everybody is on the go and have less time to prepare meals. Another benefit for high patronage is that fast
food
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is reasonably priced in terms of
quantity
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quantity, for
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, One can buy a full meal for less that five Hundred Naira and be satisfied.
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, most fast
food
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outlets are
out doing
be or do something to a greater degree
outdoing
themselves to increase sales by offering
attactive
pleasing to the eye or mind especially through beauty or charm
attractive
sales promo like 'buy one get one free' or 'buy one get another half-price'. All of these benefits among
others have
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others, have
further
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pushed
consuption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
of ready- made meals.
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, we need to stop and analyse the drawbacks to the increased consumption of fast-
food
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to the
individuals
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individual
individual's
health. Statistics
has shown
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have shown
that fast-
food
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outlets are poorly regularised
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is because there are either no health inspectors or less qualified inspectors to monitor the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. As
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there is no guarantee that the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
where the
food
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is prepared is safe neither are there guarantees of the hygiene of the chef or the personnels working in the
jionts
united or combined
joints
. More so fast
food
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are
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is
highly
calorised
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colourised
colorised
meals which could lead to obesity.
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, most Americans suffer from obesity
as a result
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of high consumption of fast
food
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which is mostly made from
food
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products containing high fats like cheese, butter, floor, milk
,
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,
suger
a white crystalline carbohydrate used as a sweetener and preservative
sugar
, pork, chicken etc. In conclusion, I agree that readily made meals are affordable, quick and easily accessible at any time of the
day but
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day, but
these advantages are no where
nera
not far distant in time or space or degree or circumstances
near
the health hazards to individuals and society if consumed without moderation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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