Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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days the majority of companies are approaching various strategies

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as sponsoring sports events to increase their sales. Some opine that

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strategy is not only promoting the games largely but

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providing a platform for new

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others believe that companies are now selling low quality and health hazardous products by advertising these on the sports events.

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, both points of view need to be addressed before formulating the opinion.

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with, one of the major benefits of sponsoring sports events is its significance of promoting any game and it

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increases the income of companies. Due to fewer funds for particular games by the government, people are losing their interest in these games. So when companies sponsor these games largely definitely they will more likely to watch these games.

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will help in promoting any

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, sponsorship for events can provide a platform for new talented players. Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise

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the other hand, by organizing sports events the majority of companies are selling low-quality products and products which have a negative impact on health. As tobacco and liquor manufacture companies are advertising their products by organizing sports events and these products are extremely harmful to health in general.

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, Kingfisher is basically a wine supplier

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is using the ground of sporting events in order to boost its income

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wine has negative on the human body. To sum up, Certainly, sponsoring sports events

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providing chances to new sportsmen.

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, the negative outcomes of these promotions can not be denied. I personally believe that whether companies are promoting games for their own

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these are beneficial for promoting sports at all.

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Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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young adults, compared with the of older people. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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