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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individual and on the society

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On one hand, several factors cause individuals to spend less
time
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 at
home
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. One main reason is their job.
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 is because people need to make income in order to maintain a good standard of living.
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 is to say that they have to provide for their daily needs and that of their family.
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, traffic is another contributing factor.
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 can be
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 of
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the large number
a large number
 of cars on the road and poor conditions of roads. People living far from their place of work can
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 be a causative factor as they spend a lot of
time
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 on the road. A recent research conducted in Lagos concluded that one
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 of an individual
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 is spent on traffic jam.
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, spending less
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 at
home
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 has a large effect on the individuals and society.
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, people will face lack of social life and communication which will affect their character negatively.
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, children from
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 homes often times feel neglected and withdrawn due to the fact that they feel unloved by their
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.
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, spending little
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 at
home
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 reduces productivity.
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 is to say that workers will not be able to deliver at their full capacity resulting from
stress which
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stress, which
 can be gotten from spending huge amount of
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 away from
home
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.
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, affecting the economy of the society. Conclusively,
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 there are reasons why people stay away from their residence, its effect can be felt on their character and work output and
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 on the nation's economy.
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