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Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales and their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

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Companies nowadays use many different techniques to increase their sales of the merchandise as sales i
s
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are
 the most important part of the business.
This
 essay will discuss various methods to improve sales
also
 it will showcase the most efficient technique. There are various methods used by the companies to improve the sales technique. S
ale
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The sale
 of a
product
 can be increased by advertising. Another method to attract the customer is by providing d
iscount
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discounts
on the
product
such
 as buy one get one free.
This
 m
ethods
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method
 a
re widely used
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is widely used
by many consumer based business to improve their sales. The most efficient way to increase the sales is by advertising the
product
. Advertising plays a
n
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a
 key part in the modern business as it directly i
nforms the customer the
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informs the customer
benefits of the
product
. Advertising can be done through various mediums like TV, radio, newspaper and big h
ordings.
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headings
holdings
 Now a days advertising is
also
 through social media like Facebook and Instagram as most of the p
eoples
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people
 are active on
this
 social networking s
ites
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site
.
Accept space
.
For example
, fair and lovely cream despite of many beauty products in m
arket
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the market
 it is the most prominently used by w
omens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
humans
.
Accept space
.
The company does s
trong advert
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a strong advert
of the
product
 in which they showcase the direct benefits of cream with g
uarantee
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a guarantee
the guarantee
of the result. In Conclusion, there i
s
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are
 various methods like advertising, providing d
iscount
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discounts
on
p
roduct
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products
a product
 used by the companies to increase their sales. The most effective technique is advertising the
product
 through various mediums as it can be reach widely group of consumers more conveniently.
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