Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

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According to

unlversities

the body of faculty and students at a university

universities

should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every

subject

Therefore

this

essay will show some reasons of

argument

for and

argument

against.

Firstly

, I will discuss about two reasons of

argument

for

to begin

with universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every

subject

because it will be

balance

Suggestion

a balance

the balance

of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These

lead

Suggestion

leads

to, new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of

society not

Accept comma addition

society, not

eccept

generally approved or compelling recognition

accepted

in each side.

In addition

, nowadays, the most societies become to

accept ability

satisfactoriness by virtue of conforming to approved standards

acceptability

of both in any way.

Secondly

, I will discuss about one reason of

argument

Suggestion

the argument

an argument

arguments

against that s some subjects not suitable for each other.

For example

, some

subject

of sports

such

as weight

putting

(baseball) the batter's attempt to get on base

batting

. It is not suitable for female because there are

different

Suggestion

differences

of body between male and female. In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every

subject

Moreover

, it

depen

Suggestion

depends

depend

depended

on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by

themselve

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with

this

topic.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

220 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

Fully explain your ideas

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