Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to

this

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statement, the wealthy and poor people have different pathways for entering into

university

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. In my opinion, the people from

low background

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low backgrounds

which

has lack of economic problem has

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is lack of economic problem having

has lack of economic problem has

more difficult for studying in

university

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than rich peoples. On the one hand, the wealthy students with

poor mark

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a poor mark

poor marks

in their examination will get

admission

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easily

in

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into

the

university

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.

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, they will give capitation fee for the

admission

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or they can influence the

university

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management team by proper recommendation.

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, the rich people have more social status in the society, so the politicians or any other superior officers were interested in their admissions. So the economically sounded people have more reliable to get

admission

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easily

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eased

and

also

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they can afford the huge fees of the

university

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.

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, the poor people can’t afford the capitation fee so the chance of getting

admission

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is lower compared to wealthy peoples. The management of the

university

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have more interested to give

admission

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for

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to

rich people because they got plenty of

money

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from each

admission

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.

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, the students from poor family are

neglected due

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neglected, due

to the lack of

money

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. Even they got

admission

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without donation, they can’t afford the semester fees. In conclusion, I believe that the poor students are not easily accessible to

university

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than

wealthy

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wealthier

students. The

money

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plays an important role for the accessibility into

university

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. In our society, everybody

respect

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respects

the people who have

money

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and give less value for honour, trust and truth.

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the achievements of poor students are not considered in the society.