Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the country side. What can be done to solve this situation?

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Nowadays, the youngsters are moving to urban areas from rural areas by leaving their parents. There are so many reasons behind

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migration.

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discusses

about the problems occur through

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matter and the solution for

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issue.

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, the reason behind the migration of teenagers to cities or towns would be the facilities in the urban area. For a student, there will be more opportunity to study in urban areas than rural areas. Because, there are several top universities or colleges or any other institutes are there in

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the cities

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, the lack of education facility is one of the main

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problems

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issue and

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lack of career opportunity. In cities all facilities are easily available

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as education, job, recreation, sports, games, arts etc. So the teenagers will more

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attract

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this facilities

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these facilities

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, due to

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migration most of the old people feel loneliness in their home. They didn’t get enough take care

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their children, so they forcefully shifted to old age homes. Senior citizens are the most worth for the nation, because they have more experience than

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younger

people. The children have the responsibility to take care of their parents and

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focused on their

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the particular occupation for which you are trained

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for their future growth. But it quite difficult to handle both, so that we need a solution for

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issue.

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, to solve

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situation government would grant more facilities to rural areas.

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the country side will get more opportunity to develop. By introducing so many new innovative projects

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this

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area makes the people to live in better life.

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we can reduce the developing business of old age homes. In conclusion, I believe that by introducing more innovative projects

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rural areas

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can solve

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situation.

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, it leads to an increase of new old age homes and the old people didn’t get enough take care

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their children. By considering their feelings, the government would initiate to develop country side.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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330 words

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Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the country side. What can be done to solve this situation?

Fully explain your ideas

In modern times young adults spending more time with their friends and less time with family. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on tour next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. in your letter, -Thank him/her for the invitation. -Explain why you can't come -Ask him/her about other times to visit.

Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.