It is Generally Accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Physical fitness plays a significant role in everyone’s life. It is
also
an important aspect
for
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of
all age groups. In my view, physical training has to be made mandatory and included as part of the educational curriculum for pupils. So, they can get trained in their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport along with their academic subjects which is helpful for physically and mentally. The1980s, children use be very
sportive
furnishing support or assistance
supportive
at home as well as, when they are participating in any games because of the culture that was inherited around them. In those days, there were heaps of playgrounds,
thus
, people use to socialize during morning walks and
also
when there are playing a
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport of their choice.
For instance
, if someone’s interested in playing cricket, he can socialize around 22 people (Each team consists of 11 members).
Additionally
, it teaches anger and stress management when you are losing a game or winning it.
Besides
, a person can burn calories and keep himself fit.
However
,
this
is not the case now, everyone has become tech-savvy. To overcome
this
issue,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e. Outdoor sports must be promoted by the government and schools. It's not only the responsibility of a physical
trainer but
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trainer, but
also
should be with the parents because these days most of us are occupied with gadgets.
For example
, Social Networking, playing video games on TV, etc. Every educational institute has to allocate time in
student's daily curriculum
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the student's daily curriculum
for physical training as a mandatory class. Physical education is available in every
school but, there
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school, but there
is no mandatory circular
that is
laid by the government or school supremacy. That’s the reason, it has taken for granted by the teachers as well as by the pupils. I strongly believe that,
Firstly
, the benefits of
physicals
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
fitness, sports or being an athlete should be explained by the parents.
Secondly
, sporting events should be promoted by the government.
Finally
, the students should choose at least three sports of their interest and
finally
, the required exercise for a day will be accomplished.
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