The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
This
table compares the opinion of
males
and
females
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club
members of a city sports
club
about the services in four categories
such
as
activities
, facilities and opening
hours
.
Overall
, a significant toll of
females
portions are very satisfied with opening
hours
, and a few
proportion
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proportions
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of
males
are not satisfied with the
club
's
activities
. Now, turning to the details, nearly as many men as women are very satisfied with
club
facilities,
accounted
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for 63% and 64%, respectively,
whereas
22% and 27% of
females
and
males
are satisfied, but only 14% and 10% are not satisfied. As can be seen in the table, more
males
than
females
think that
club
activities
are very
satisfied
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satisfactory
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,
while
only 35% of
females
are satisfied with
this
facility. We can see that most of the people are very satisfied with all services
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on averagely
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averagely
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, but 37% and 30% of both genders complain they are not satisfied with opening
hours
and
club’s
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the club’s
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activities
.
Although
, only a tiny percentage of
females
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female
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members are not satisfied with opening
hours
and 37% of
males
are not satisfied, 72% of
females
and 44% of
males
are very satisfied with
this
service.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, club, activities, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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