One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Advances made in the medical field act as a boon to mankind. Because of which people are living disease free with falling death rates.
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essay deals about the positive outcomes resulted from an enhanced health care as well as the challenges associated with it.
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To begin
with, since 40 years a number of endemic diseases have been controlled and eliminated. Thanks to the development made in the medical industry, which quelled the Linking Words
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span of a healthy individual has been increased till 70 years, because of the effective immunisation and vaccination programs that are administered since about age 3. Use synonyms
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On the contrary
, the situation has been greatly improved now.
As a coin has both sides, there are a quite number of challenges associated with the advanced health care. Linking Words
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has to bear the medical expenses incurred by the senior citizens as well as the people living below the poverty line. Use synonyms
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the impoverished people from accessing the basic medical needs.
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