The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the
number
of social networking sites
visited by the people of Canada in the year 2014 and 2015.
Overall
, Canadians preferred to access one site
at a time (36% in 2014 and 28% in 2015) when using computer
. Surprisingly, there are still a great Add an article
the computer
a computer
number
of people who don’t visit social media sites
with 22% in 2014 and a decrease of 1% in the following year.
Focusing to
the Change preposition
on
number
of users in relation to number
of Change the article
a number
the number
sites
opened, an obvious decline in figures can be observed for both years. 2014 have the highest percentage but was limited to one site
only. The same behavior
was Change the spelling
behaviour
being
displayed by users in 2015 with 28 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
.
Interestingly, if we compare the drop in the percentage of users versus Change the spelling
per cent
to
the Change preposition
apply
number
of sites
being open at a time, 2014 have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
wider
gap than 2015. From 36%(1site) to 23% (2sites) to 12%(3sites) to 5%(4sites) to 2% (5sites). Add an article
a wider
While
the following year its
from 28%, 24%, 16%, 8%, to 4% respectively.
In conclusion, Replace the word
it's
it is
while
majority
of the Canadians use one Add an article
the majority
a majority
site
at a time, there is an insignificant number
of them who are starting to explore simultaneously other sites
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, sites, site with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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