The charts below give information about two Brazilian cities. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about two Brazilian cities.

Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the average of rainfall and
temperature
, depending on month, in two different places in Brazil: Brasilia and Recife. In the capital, the quantity of water fallen down peaks in December with almost 240
mm
,
while
in the other city, it is lower, just under 50
mm
;
thus
the hours of sunshine daily are 4 for the first one and 8 for the
second
one. Despite
this
evidence, the avenge of days with thunder is opposite, 15 versus only one. The range of
temperature
is approximately from 35
°C
to 13
°C
, during most months in Brasilia,
instead
of Recife, where the trend is different,
in other words
between just over 35
°C
to just under 20
°C
.
Moreover
, during the Summer, the
temperature
in the capital suffers many changing, in fact, it ranges from 30
°C
to 0
°C
, even if it could peak maximum on August, where the grades are over 35. Contrary to Recife, where the situation is levelled off, except for July: the
temperature
drops its range which is between 32
°C
and 20
°C
. As a matter of fact, the level of water is high in
this
period,
that is
250
mm
. The sector, where the rainfall is low, is during the Autumn,
while
in Brasilia it is during the hottest period and the quantity of liquid is about 2 or 3
mm
:

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, mm, °c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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