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Airlines are dropping their prices. Is it a positive or a negative development? Support your stand with examples.

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It is said that the
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 fares are falling. I believe
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 is a positive advance because it allows people to
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 overseas for business or for leisure purposes and it is good for small economies.
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, low-
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air
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 travels allows people to fly more often.
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, I visited my sister in Ireland 4 times in the past three years, which would be unthinkable in the past because the flight prices were high for my financial possibilities. With low
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 fares it would be easier for people to
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 to exotic places abroad.
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, people are travelling more often to places like Dubai or Bali. It
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 benefits business people or foreign who need to
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 frequently.
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, it would help increase local economies. When we
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 to some places, we purchase goods at the local shops which helps local businesses to grow, plus we need to pay for the hotel and with more tourism affluence there is a higher possibility of hotel taxes to drop. So, if the number of tourists increases,
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 the local stores benefits greatly. It
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 would decrease the
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 of goods imported.
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, Indian products are much more expensive in Portugal than they are in India because the transportation
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 is
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 added to the price.
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, with low
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air
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 travelling the price of importation would drop, which would enable the product prices to fall. To conclude, low
cost
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air
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travel
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 helps increase local economies, it facilitates
travel
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 for business people, and it entices people to
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 to paradise destinations.
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, lower flying prices are without a doubt a positive development.
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