Some people believe that to be successful in sport, natural ability is necessary while others think hardwork and practice is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there have been an increasing number of
sport
fanatics.
Although
it is believed by some that high
achievement
Suggestion
achievers
in
sport
mostly come from
in-born
present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development
inborn
talent
, others opine to the fact that constant practices are of more value. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
talent paves way
Suggestion
the talent paves way
a talent paves way
to a high achieving career in
sport
Suggestion
sports
the sport
as against constant practices. On the one hand, it can be said that
talent
plays an important role in of
sport
Suggestion
the sport
sports
because it comes with ease for the
sportmen
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
sportsmen
. Take
for instance
some African American
basket ball
a game played on a court by two opposing teams of 5 players; points are scored by throwing the ball through an elevated horizontal hoop
basketball
players who are about seven feet tall in
comparism
with the Asians who most often times are barely up to five feet eight inches. The fact that the Negros
are
Suggestion
is
taller have placed them
on
Suggestion
at
an advantage.
In other words
, height plays a key role in a game like basketball and
in-born
present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development
inborn
talent
often times cannot be ruled out from physical attributes. More so, over the years, the
caucasians
a member of the Caucasoid race
Caucasians
sections
caucasians'
have been known to be best at swimming and the
kenyas
Suggestion
Kenyas
canals
kernels
have been known to be great at running because of the kind of land forms
perculiar
beyond or deviating from the usual or expected
peculiar
to their country.
On the other hand
, certain persons argue that practice is
themost
Suggestion
the most
important because it develops an individual's tenacity and determination.
This
is quite so, but it is often times costly.
This
is because to make an individual competitive,
alot
Suggestion
a lot
of
practices
Suggestion
practice
will be
needed which
Accept comma addition
needed, which
might entail using the gym or buying some equipment. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
while some are of the opinion that success in
sport
is attained through lots of practice,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
differ
in
Suggestion
with
that opinion. I am of the school of thought that natural abilities are more beneficial and of greater value.
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