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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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There are originally seven basic
colours
 in the world which we can notice in a rainbow. It will have red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet. All other
colours
where
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 developed by combining a particular amount of one with another
colour
.
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, brown, pink, white, black and so on these are
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examples of mixing
colours
.I will discuss
about
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how
colour
 plays a key role in
humans
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humans'
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 mental health in
day to day
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 life Generally a human being will have
change
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 of mind
according to
the
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nature and the surroundings. Most of the time Whenever
people
 see a thing they start to think and imagine about it. There are many things that will disturb
the
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people
 and cause them
inconvience
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inconvenience
such
 as sound, air, high temperature and so on. In the same
way
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colour
 will
also
 impact human thinking.
for example
,
eveyone
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everyone
will have their own favourite
colour
 and they want to paint their houses with their choice of
colour
 and purchase things,
dresses
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 everything whatever they feel to own
it
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for themselves. when it comes to public places there are some
colours
 which
gives
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 them
a
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peace of mind
while
 seeing it for
long
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 time. In some
researches
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research
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, scientists found that white
colour
 gives you
peaceful
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a peaceful
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 mind and relaxation
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at
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a
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 longer time visual of
colour
.
For instance
 in large number of hospital management prefer to paint in white
colour
 because the patients will get relaxation seeing it without going
in depression
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depressed
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 about
thier
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their
 health,
while
 for parks many suggest
to paint
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 the compound
in
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green
colour
. In my opinion, A decent
colour
 and pleasant
colour
 can improve
the
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people
's mental ability in their work. Nowadays, every product comes in different
colours
 to attract
the
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people
 in every way for growth in their business. It is a business
stratigy
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strategy
 even though
people
doesn't
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 want to buy the product they will get tempted
of
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 the
colour
 and
brought
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 it. .

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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