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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
When you are at the helm of
an
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a
 university it teaches you that everyone is equal. You will have social subjects, learn personality development
,
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,
 sports etc. But,
on the other
hand when
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hand, when
 you are in the process to enter
one there
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one, there
 is a lot of hindrances which completely dismantles the ideology of the place. If I talk about India, reservations are something which has ruined the careers of a lot of deserving candidates and hasn't been kind to them. If we talk about the poor and the rich, the case here is not the
money
 but it is more than that. Power is something everyone lusts and uplifting the poor is one armour they use and curbing the rich is another. The riches
has
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have
 their own way of spending
money
 and getting
in
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into
 the university. The main areas that get affected here is the middle class structure which is close to 50% of the population, they neither have the
money
 nor the support. They are the ones who
gets
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get
grinded
the solid part of the earth's surface
ground
grounded
 in all
this
 fuss and are hit hard. The poor gets political support and the riches have the
money but
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money, but
 if
someone somewhere really want
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someone, somewhere really wants
someone somewhere really wants
 to assess the situation here its the ones in the middle who have
nowehere
not anywhere; in or at or to no place
nowhere
 to go and for them it all comes down to
efforts
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the efforts
 and showcase their merit. They have to prove themselves at every stage and which do turn them into a strong
personality but
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personality, but
 takes away a piece
from
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of
 their mind, body and life.
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