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Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent times, broadcasting has been painting everything bad and
therefore
 needs to bring morality into the reporting. In
this
 essay, I will provide insight about the dangers of poor persona branding and fake news.
Although
 I quiet agree with introducing sanity into their communication. The effect of fake news in a country cannot be fully reported. Lack of investigative journalism and dissemination of factual, truthful and concise information would have brought unity among citizens of a country.
For instance
, In Nigeria, falsified reports have created divisions in lines of tribe, religion and politics which have in many ways affect development and growth of the nation as a whole. Hoax news has given birth to hate speech which has
further
 widened gaps among the residents of our great country.
For example
, prior to the 2015 general election, various sham stories were shared to discredit personality and political parties and in most cases
this
 action jeopardize the dreams of our fore father's. The role of branding in communication is vital in public perception. Poor persona, making by media outfits to de-market some personality and product have done lots of damage to name of human and goods. It is imperative to know that defamation of character has become a tool in publications to undermine others. It is important that government and other stakeholders should have a roundtable discussion bringing the voices of ill informed about the problems in communication while advocating for good profile projection.
For instance
, a rumour about those eating Indomie who died after its consumption.
This
 is a bad impression of the products which ultimately affects sales and when an image is involved can lead to the person committing suicide. In conclusion, provision of verified information in daily print and motion will foster unity among people at the same time discouraging spreading of fake news as well as shunning poor public presentation would
also
 help develop love and harmony within the populace.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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