Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Due to newly
evalutionized
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revolutionize
revolutionized
world people
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world, people
enforced to use new technologies that will help them in various activities. Presently solar
energy
is using
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is used
in
house holds
a social unit living together
households
and getting its ground in
number
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a number
of countries.Here
this
essay will give
clear view
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a clear view
of advantage and disadvantage of solar
panel
. On
constructive side
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the constructive side
,
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,
it has offered an alternative source of
energy
that is
not harming the surrounding. The source
energy
such
as motor generators will
also
produce
electricity but
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electricity, but
it is unsafe to the habitat because it pollutes the climate.
Furthermore
,
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,
the cost of setting up
solar
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a solar panel
panel
are
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is
pocket friendly because government promoting solar
panel
.
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.
For instance
study conducted by environmentalist
reveal
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reveals
that
government
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the government
is
given
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giving
50℅ offer for purchasing solar panels and
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its
usage is remarkably shortened the level of air infection.So it is helping the atmosphere in
great way
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a great way
great ways
.
On the other hand
, solar
panel
makes
energy
from
energy
depending on the weather condition. They are unable to reproduce
daily required amount
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the daily required amount
of
energy
during
winter
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the winter
and rainy season due to lack of sunlight.
Additionaly
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Additionally
,
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,
solar panels consumes lots of space because of their size and
nowdays
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nowadays
most of the people are living in flats,
appartments
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
apartment
and soon so it is difficult to for them to install solar panels because space is limited.
For
example a
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example, a
survey conducted by
government
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the government
has shown that large section of society is still using
moter
machine that converts other forms of energy into mechanical energy and so imparts motion
motor
matter
mortar
generators as their power origin because of of rainy and winter seasons. To summarize, it is clear that solar
comforts
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Comforts
the environment
not get
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doesn't get
polluted even if it is space consuming but
also
civilians should use it as a power station to secure the environment in order to save the species.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
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  • Off-grid
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  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
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  • Payback period
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