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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people say that electronic books and new
technology
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 will absolutely replace classic newspapers and magazines. I
partially agrees
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partially agree
am partially agreeing
have partially agreed
 the statement and will discuss and my views In the upcoming paragraphs. In
this
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 century, The world
have been changed
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has been changed
 to better
with
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by
 using the modern
technology
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 in changing the way of
life
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.
Technology
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 is the new
life
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 of
this
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 century by using computers, smartphones, and other devices.
This
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 development helps a lot of people’s
life
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 and studying and working,
its
it is
it's
 totally changed our
life
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.
For example
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, before couple of years, The way
for
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of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 was hard because you should go to book a ticket to travel.
With
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By
 using
technology
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, we can book a ticket from online Internet by using our devices. Young people are reading the
technology
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 to improve our
life
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 more and more, every year the discovering new
technology
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 to
use
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 it in our normal
life
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.
On the other hand
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, The old people where they cannot
use
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technology
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 because they are not the generation of the
technology
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. They are accustomed to
use
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newspaper
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 and magazines in their daily
life
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, so they have the right to read
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newspaper
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the newspaper
newspapers
 rather than using
technology
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.
In addition
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, newspapers and magazines are still important in our
life
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 because buying
newspaper
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 is the new easiest way to know the daily news in the world. They should balance between reading
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newspaper
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a newspaper
the newspaper
 and using
technology
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. Newspapers have the details of what the reader want a type of
newspaper
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. In conclusion, I agree that
technology
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 is changing our
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life but
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life, but
 I don’t agree that will totally replace newspapers and magazines. There
is
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are
 a lot of people where they like newspapers and magazines,
they
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They
 shouldn’t force them to
use
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technology
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.

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