the crime rate nowadays is decreasing comapred to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. do you agree or disagree

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In the present world, technology is being used everywhere. Not only new gadgets being used in our personal life, but

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in all sectors of social system. Many crimes are prevented and solved due to advanced systems. Day by day new softwares, applications and hardwares are coming they are very helpful to reduce theft, robbery and social crimes. So, It is agreed that advance technology reduces illegal activities and make social life better. Let's look at the few softwares, which are helpful to nab the criminals.

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, "Amber alert system" In Canada, we must have seen

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alert many times on TV and mobile phones.

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becomes very useful when any child goes missing or any criminal is absconding. The Police Department uses

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program and generate alerts, which flashes on cell phones and "Tele Vision". Due to

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alert, people become aware. Most of the times, child found and running criminal caught. Now, few hardwares, those are used by some departments. "Fake currency detector" is one of them,

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machine is very useful to catch the counterfeit bills. In the recent past, we hear many times fake currency news.

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can destabilize the financial system of any country. So,

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machine is very helpful. Earlier

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was used in banks only, but now we can see that

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machine is being used by some people. These are just a few examples, which I explained. There is a long list. In earlier days, without these advanced systems, crime was

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prevented, but not compared to present time. These mature gadgets and computer programs have taken important space in all parts of social life and institutions and helping society to become crime free. I hope, in the future

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will become so advanced that crime will be prevented before it's committed.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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surveillance systems
CCTV cameras
forensic technology
crime scene analysis
conviction rates
data analytics
predictive policing
high-risk areas
cybersecurity measures
cybercrime
sensitive information
social media
online platforms
emergencies
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the crime rate nowadays is decreasing comapred to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. do you agree or disagree

Fully explain your ideas

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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city.

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Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?