The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over of two-year period. Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over of two-year period. Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of employees without a job, after two years of the degree,
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the age between twenty and twenty-four, in an unspecific European nation. First of all, it is possible observing how the percentage of men, in each considered period,
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higher than that of women.
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, male people peak in October 2009, with just over 20%, but in the meanwhile,
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female ones do the same, with only just under 15
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.
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, the worst result for
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women was in April and July 2008 and April 2009, where the number of unemployed graduates was almost 5%. Even though, the surge
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the lack of
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in October 2008 for boys,
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levelled off at approximately 10 percentage points, until the increase in the
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period of 2009. During
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time,
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, the girls saw climbing their occupations,
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the proportion plummeted. In the first sector of the bar chart, a similar trend was reached for female people,
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male ones, there was a slight decrease.

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