The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I believe that being healthy has always been a priority and many do take excellent care of themselves physically but many seem. To ignore the fact that mental
health
is
likewise
important; and due to the fact that we are living a stressful
live
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life
it is bound to deteriorate.
Therefor in
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Therefor, in
my opinion our
health
standards will keep getting. Lower in the future. The stress level of a teenager today is same as the patient of a mental hospital in the 1700s and it is quite prominent in our younger generation. 12-13 years old kids today are becoming victims of depression and low self confidence which has not been seen in the older generations. As many doctors have already said, that the stress it the main cause
for
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of
many underlying
health
issues. We live in a very stressful environment so,
ther
in or at that place
there
their
is no way of escaping it entirely unless we learn to deal with it
accordingly
Nowadays people in general have more access to knowledge than ever before and with greater knowledge comes greater
responsibility but
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responsibility, but
I don't think we are taking it as seriously as it is meant to be. Today we are very medically advance and are still going
forward but
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forward, but
the quality of our basic necessities
are facing
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is facing
a downfall e.
g
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G
food, water, climate e.t.c. Our education system has
also
become more stressful. The thing that students used to learn in 10th grade are now being taught in 4-5 grade. In conclusion, we as a society need. To adapt to our stressful lives in a
more
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healthier
more healthy
health
way and try to take it a notch down. If not, our
health
will keep on getting deteriorate.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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