In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree?

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A good reason for not charging students for higher studies is that it will improve the financial condition of the individual and the country.
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is because many corporations are hiring college graduates as they have vast practical and theoretical knowledge.
As a result
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, companies are getting benefited and graduates are getting well-paid jobs which help's them financially.
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, countries are gaining more taxes from each of
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strengthens overall financial condition.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equal opportunity
  • higher education
  • educated and skilled workforce
  • student loans
  • graduate
  • debt burden
  • incentivize
  • pursue
  • educational attainment
  • knowledge-based economy
  • social mobility
  • low-income students
  • socioeconomic status
  • economic growth
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • skilled labor
  • overcrowded classrooms
  • quality of education
  • public funding
  • higher taxes
  • reallocation of resources
  • essential services
  • mixed model
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