The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph shows the kinds of activities
done by older people in their spare time, covering a period from the 1980s to now in the United States. We can see that generally
the Add a comma
,generally
activities
listed have been increasing in popularity
amongst the elderly, with hiking has
increased steadily throughout the years, and watching TV Wrong verb form
having
being
the most popular Change the form of the verb
is
overall
.
In the 1980s, nearly all activities
were growing in popularity
. The only activity which was becoming less popular over these years was going to the theatre
. Going to the theatre
declined steeply from 50% to 30%.
This
changed in the 1990s, and going to the theatre
became more popular, whereas
reading saw a dramatic drop in popularity
. The number of people doing all other activities
increased.
This
century, hiking, reading, going to the theatre
and surfing the Internet have all been increasing in popularity
. However
, watching TV has been decreasing in popularity
. Despite this
, watching TV is still the second
most popular activity nowadays amongst this
group. Most elderly people are hiking nowadays in their spare time.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, popularity, theatre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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