The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The chart demonstrates the proportion of shared car usage across the globe in two discrete years, 2008 and 2016. (19)
Overall
, the highest number of cars
was shared in Europe in 2008 and in North America
in 2016 and the lowest in South America
in both years. In North America
, the usage of shared cars
increased significantly from 31% to just over 50% in 2016. A reverse trend was recorded in Europe where this
figure went down dramatically from just under 60% to almost 33% in 2016. For the other three regions, no considerable use of shared cars
was observed. It was approximately equal in Australia and Asia in 2016 at about 5% but slightly lower Australia
in 2008. For South Change preposition
in Australia
America
, although
cars
were shared in the least ratios in both years, but
their usage was exactly double in 2016 as compared to 2008. (125)
Remove the conjunction
apply
Thus
, global Car sharing schemes remained the most popular in North America
and Europe, in both 2008 and 2016, than any other region of the world. (26)Submitted by furqantaseer.ntu on
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