The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
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The chart demonstrates the proportion of shared car usage across the globe in two discrete years, 2008 and 2016. (19)
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, the highest number of
cars
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was shared in Europe in 2008 and in North
America
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in 2016 and the lowest in South
America
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in both years. In North
America
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, the usage of shared
cars
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increased significantly from 31% to just over 50% in 2016. A reverse trend was recorded in Europe where
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figure went down dramatically from just under 60% to almost 33% in 2016. For the other three regions, no considerable use of shared
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was observed. It was approximately equal in Australia and Asia in 2016 at about 5% but slightly lower
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in 2008. For South
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,
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cars
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were shared in the least ratios in both years,
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their usage was exactly double in 2016 as compared to 2008. (125)
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, global Car sharing schemes remained the most popular in North
America
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and Europe, in both 2008 and 2016, than any other region of the world. (26)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, america with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distribution
  • Global car sharing schemes
  • Changes over time
  • Geographical regions
  • Percentage share
  • Popularity and availability
  • Trends and policy impacts
  • Emerging markets
  • Diversification
  • Even distribution
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