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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money per week on fast foods including hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza in Britain

The bar chart illustrates the amount of money per week on fast foods including hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza in Britain
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money per week spent on fast
foods
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food
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 including
hamburgers
,
fish
 and
chips
 and
pizza
 in Britain. The preferences are divided into three groups by
income
: High, Average, Low From the bar graph, the expenditure on fast foods by the
high
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high-income
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income
group
 and average
group
are
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is
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 the highest for
hamburgers
 and pizzas
while
 it is the lowest
of
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for
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low
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low-income
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income
group
. The high and
average
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average-income
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income
group
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groups
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 spent 42 and 33
dollars
 on
hamburgers
 respectively.
The
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Pizza
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pizza
 was the
second
 preference for
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the high
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high
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high-income
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income
group
while
the
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apply
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fish
 and
chips
 were the
second
choice
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choices
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 for
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the average
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average
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average-income
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income
group
.
On the other hand
, the majority amount of money, which is 18
dollars
 was spent on
fish
 and
chips
 and 14
dollars
 on
hamburgers
 and the least amount of money 8
dollars
 on
pizza
. The graph illustrates the trends in
consumption
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the consumption
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 of fast foods from 1970-1990.
Overall
, the
consumption
 of
fish
 and
chips
 decreased over the years
while
 the
consumption
 of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 increased drastically. The
consumption
 of
pizza
 increased constantly
by
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apply
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little
by little
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apply
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. The usage of
fish
 and
chips
deceased
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decreased
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 from 308
grams
 to 240
grams
while
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 increased drastically from 90 to 540
grams
. The usage of
pizza
 had a steady increase from 40 to 280
grams
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips, pizza, income, group, dollars, consumption, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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