The bar chart illustrates the amount of money per week on fast foods including hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza in Britain
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money per week spent on fast
foods
including Fix the agreement mistake
food
hamburgers
, fish
and chips
and pizza
in Britain. The preferences are divided into three groups by income
: High, Average, Low
From the bar graph, the expenditure on fast foods by the high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
group
and average group
are
the highest for Change the verb form
is
hamburgers
and pizzas while
it is the lowest of
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for
low
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low-income
income
group
.
The high and average
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average-income
income
group
spent 42 and 33 Fix the agreement mistake
groups
dollars
on hamburgers
respectively. The
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Pizza
pizza
was the second
preference for Correct article usage
the high
high
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high-income
income
group
while
the
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apply
fish
and chips
were the second
choice
for Change the noun form
choices
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the average
average
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average-income
income
group
. On the other hand
, the majority amount of money, which is 18 dollars
was spent on fish
and chips
and 14 dollars
on hamburgers
and the least amount of money 8 dollars
on pizza
.
The graph illustrates the trends in consumption
of fast foods from 1970-1990.
Correct article usage
the consumption
Overall
, the consumption
of fish
and chips
decreased over the years while
the consumption
of hamburger
increased drastically. The Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
consumption
of pizza
increased constantly by
littleChange preposition
apply
by little
.
The usage of Remove the redundancy
apply
fish
and chips
deceased
from 308 Correct your spelling
decreased
grams
to 240 grams
while
hamburger
increased drastically from 90 to 540 Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
grams
. The usage of pizza
had a steady increase from 40 to 280 grams
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