Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that they can judge about
person's culture
Suggestion
a person's culture
and
character
from their dressing.
Although
it is not possible to tell precisely about people's culture and
character
from clothes every time, many times, it is very easy to take a call regarding their
background
and
character
from their clothing. So, I partially disagree with
this
statement, which I will discuss in the coming paragraphs. On the one side, some people argue that it is not possible to tell about anyone's
background
and
character
by observing their clothes. Many times, people have to wear
certain kind
Suggestion
certain kinds
a certain kind
of clothing because of compulsion. In a lot of countries and communities, there are strict protocols for clothings, especially for women.
Hence
, it is not possible to tell how a
person
is and from which
background
that
person
hails
a person who possesses great material wealth
has
.
For example
, my mother has to wear traditional clothes in community functions while she wears a modern dress every time. On the other side, dressing tells many things about a
person
,
such
as
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, thinking, and
background
. If a
person
wears expensive clothes on casual occasion,
then
that
person
likes to show-off, if someone
do not have
Suggestion
does not have
proper fittings
Suggestion
the proper fittings
of the dress that
person
is not aware of common sense, so clothes disclose many things.
In addition
to
this
, the choice of clothing
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
also
tells a lot.
For example
, if someone wears a bright
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
in a funeral,
then
everyone notices a lack of common sense it that
person
. To conclude, though it is not possible to tell precisely about people from their clothing, many times, it is possible to know about them from their clothes because dressings can tell many things about persons
such
as their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, common sense etc.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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