Nowadays, people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalist? What qualities should be a good journalist or correspondent have?

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News help us to remain up-to-date with the world and these are received from various modes a few are television, radio and internet. In

this

technological era, a piece of information spreads like a wildfire that people have become

skeptical and

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sceptical, and

sceptical and

this

human nature is giving rise to a moot question of trusting the

journalist

or not. A

journalist

who is responsible for showing the true picture of the society is not free from the blot. A news reader can be misguided by the false or exaggerated news given by a

journalist

Moreover

, in

this

materialist

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materialistic

era, people want

whole nine yards

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the whole nine yards

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

this

greed can be fulfilled only with money. Money which is given in excess to

journalist

who praise and show only the positive sides of a particular political

parties

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party

. Simply, they become puppets of the parties and try to create a white

collar

a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect

colour

image of them. So, people should not blindly believe

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about

the

news but

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news, but

should analyse and understands news from different facets to extract the actual matter as

today

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today's

journalist

are famous for making

mountain

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a mountain

mountains

out of

mole hill

Suggestion

a mole hill

. Journalism is not everyone's cup of tea. There are many challenges in

this

field. A person who wants to be a

journalist

needs to be brave to overcome these obstacles as people bribe them to change their news and to make them speakers of the party. A reporter should be unbiased to portray the actual picture of the person or the situation. People are introduced to different topics by the

journalist so

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journalist, so

journalist

should be well versed with myriad topics and even if he does not know about something

then

he should have

curiosity

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the curiosity

to learn different things. Above all, command over language is needed as an orator who can convey properly can touch a millions o heart and make his point crystal clear

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the receiver's mind. Contemplating all the aforementioned points, I would like to say that

journalist

should work with dignity and be loyal to their profession as their news have a profound effect on people's mind and they are playing an important part in shaping the society we live in.

Mon Nov 25 2019

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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