In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some of the counties, a few people are
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yielding
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is a positive development for the growth of that nation while others believe that, authorities should restrict
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to a certain level.
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government
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should not allow salaries to a certain extent. On the one hand, when some people get
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a good salary
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, it creates chaos among others. In detail, in a country, all the people should be treated equally,
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, the majority of the citizens may have a negative approach towards others.
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deteriorates
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should treat all the citizens in the same manner.
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has
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government's role
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the government's role
is to maintain an equality.
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, they should treat all citizens as the same and provide good perks and
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for
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government
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the government
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some people get
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a good salary
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the government
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person's
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to maintain an average level. So in my opinion,
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should not allow very high
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to
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for
a proportion of the people only.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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