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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#university #education #income
A vast number of universities offer their
education
 for free or at insignificant tuition fees for students disregarding their income, while
this
 helps to create equality between the rich of
poor
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the poor
 on their
right
 of
education
, I strongly believe that there should be a balance between free
education
 and paid
education
 in every educational institution. Primarily, the
right
 of
education
 is a crucial element that any human being should have regardless of their income,
however making
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however, making
education
 free for everyone could increase the number of students enrolling in universities and simply, universities cannot provide to
such
 large number of students. In order to balance between free and paid
education
, universities should be assessing someone's financial ability to pay for
education
 or not, based on that assessment, universities will have the option charge for their
education
 or offer it free.
Secondly
, it is unrealistic for governments to apply free
education
;
consequently
, it will create a massive financial burden on their
budgets especially in
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budgets, especially in
 developing countries. If a government passes
such
 policy, it will contribute to its image in regards to human rights, but it will not contribute to its budget and could potentially create a shortage in funding in other aspects within the country
such
 as the
right
 of medication or personal safety within the local communities.
Besides
, several government-funded
programs evidently
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programs, evidently
 provides quality technical
education
such
 as vocational training. To conclude, everyone has the
right
 for
education but
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education, but
 it is not feasible for governments
to provide
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provide
 free
education
 unless the government can afford
free
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the free education policy
a free education policy
education
 policy.

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