More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the recent times, indigenous people are more attracted
to own
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to, own
the materialistic
items
Suggestion
items such as vehicles
such
vehicles and clothing from well known brands. There are well explained premise influencing
this
alteration which includes
increase
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increases
in general livelihood or just because to maintain a standard class in the social stratification.
Furthermore
,
this
essay will outline the details of why people are turning towards branded
items
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items, in
in contrast
with the impact of purchasing
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
products will cause.
To begin
with, previously only royal and elite families were entitled to use certain brands due to
the greater
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the great
prices of items which was untouchable by the commoners.
However
,
inception
Suggestion
the inception
of trade and business organization has changed the scenario, that results a rise in the income of individuals and encourages them to consume goods that were impossible for them to purchase single
handedly
.
For example
, in the past purple
colored
having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
coloured
silk was an item
in
Suggestion
of
clothing which was available for the royalties only because of their purchasing power, whereas now it is commonly affordable to many due to their upgraded earnings.
Therefore
, label as Nike, D &G and MKs are found as
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
brands of innumerable human beings.
On the other hand
, there is the
society
which we live in judges us by our
appearance
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appearance, such
such
as, which brand watches are being worn or what kind of car a person owns.
This
dire issue has been observed since the social stratification has taken place in the
society
to differentiate among the ranks a person holds in a community.
For instance
, Managing Director’s social life must reflect them driving a motor vehicle of an expensive brand like Audi, Mercedes.
As a result
, individuals in certain position prefer
marked
the world of commercial activity where goods and services are bought and sold
market
products that are endorsed globally by the names merely. In a nutshell, universally known brands are becoming widely acceptable based on the income level and social status,
on the contrary
, it is
also
reflexing
affording physical or mental rest
relaxing
adverse impact on the
society
. Buying
branded item
Suggestion
a branded item
is influencing many to desire for something which they are incapable of owning and not having
such
item is cracking the
society
gravely.
As a result
, a
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
product should not be
charged highly
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charged, highly
or sometimes should offer
discounts so
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discounts, so
that people all over
society
can
purchases
Suggestion
purchase
, if they desire to have one.
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