Nowadays, adults do little exercise. Some people believe that the best way to address this issue is by covering great sports events such as the Olympics on television. Others think that it is more beneficial to take other measures. What is your opinion?

These days humans do little
sport
activities. It is
argured
present reasons and arguments
argued
that by
whatcing
the act of observing; taking a patient look
watching
on TV
sport
games
this
problem
can be
solve
Suggestion
solved
, and other side another
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that it could be
find
Suggestion
found
another solution for
this
problem
. From my opinion the best solution of
this
problem
is opening
sport
areas in the streets and
microdistricts
bu
Suggestion
of
by
government, do more TV programs about
sport
acrivities
any specific behavior
activities
which adults could do at home. Most of people have no time for going to
sport
clubs because work
occupait
held or filled or in use
occupied
eight
hour
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hours
of our life and
other time
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other times
the other time
we prefer to spend with our family.
in
Suggestion
In
addition of
this
to go to
spor
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
club is expensive for some families. For
this
I think that government could open several areas with simple
apparatues
equipment designed to serve a specific function
apparatus
operates
operators
in the near of
building
Suggestion
the building
and who have not time and money for go clubs could do exercises there. For
excamle
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, after opening of
such
area in the
third
microdistrick
of the Sumgait city in 2017 year the number of people who do
exercisizes
Suggestion
the exercises
exercises
is
increase
Suggestion
increasing
in 40%.
Anorher
Suggestion
Another
solution of
this
problem
is canals could open more programs about
sport
activities which ordinary people can do at home. For
examle
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
,
to day
the present time or age
today
more and more TV canals create programs for
famales
a social unit living together
families
, and in
this
programs
Suggestion
program
some hosts with
sport
instructors show some
pilates
(trademark) a set of exercises used in holistic medicine
Pilates
exercises which can do at home. In
sum I
Accept comma addition
sum, I
would say that
healtscare
is one of the important things of our life and I must do
evrything
all things
everything
to
do
engage in
make
it good.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • high-profile
  • public awareness campaigns
  • gym memberships
  • workplace initiatives
  • government policies
  • tax incentives
  • local community events
  • physical activity
  • accessibility
  • motivation
  • successful athletes
  • broadcasting
  • inspire
  • subsidies
  • regular exercise
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