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Nowadays, adults do little exercise. Some people believe that the best way to address this issue is by covering great sports events such as the Olympics on television. Others think that it is more beneficial to take other measures. What is your opinion?

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These days humans do little
sport
 activities. It is
argured
present reasons and arguments
argued
 that by
whatcing
the act of observing; taking a patient look
watching
 on TV
sport
 games
this
problem
 can be
solve
Suggestion
solved
, and other side another
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that it could be
find
Suggestion
found
 another solution for
this
problem
. From my opinion the best solution of
this
problem
 is opening
sport
 areas in the streets and
microdistricts
bu
Suggestion
of
by
 government, do more TV programs about
sport
acrivities
any specific behavior
activities
 which adults could do at home. Most of people have no time for going to
sport
 clubs because work
occupait
held or filled or in use
occupied
 eight
hour
Suggestion
hours
 of our life and
other time
Suggestion
other times
the other time
 we prefer to spend with our family.
in
Suggestion
In
 addition of
this
 to go to
spor
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
 club is expensive for some families. For
this
 I think that government could open several areas with simple
apparatues
equipment designed to serve a specific function
apparatus
operates
operators
 in the near of
building
Suggestion
the building
 and who have not time and money for go clubs could do exercises there. For
excamle
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, after opening of
such
 area in the
third
microdistrick
 of the Sumgait city in 2017 year the number of people who do
exercisizes
Suggestion
the exercises
exercises
 is
increase
Suggestion
increasing
 in 40%.
Anorher
Suggestion
Another
 solution of
this
problem
 is canals could open more programs about
sport
 activities which ordinary people can do at home. For
examle
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
,
to day
the present time or age
today
 more and more TV canals create programs for
famales
a social unit living together
families
, and in
this
programs
Suggestion
program
 some hosts with
sport
 instructors show some
pilates
(trademark) a set of exercises used in holistic medicine
Pilates
 exercises which can do at home. In
sum I
Accept comma addition
sum, I
 would say that
healtscare
 is one of the important things of our life and I must do
evrything
all things
everything
 to
do
engage in
make
 it good.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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