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Nowadays, parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and include relevant

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These days parents are giving more
liberity
immunity from arbitrary exercise of authority: political independence
liberty
 to their offsprings when compared to the past period. But, what is the most effective way of dealing with
this
 is there should be some limit in providing it. I completely agree to
this
 and in
this
 essay I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly
, since they are giving freedom, they are getting the chance to make
mistake
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mistakes
 and correct it
of
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on
 their own.
This
 will help them to take
individula decision
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individual decisions
individual decision
an individual decision
 at their latter age and they can stand on their own legs to overcome the problems.
For example
, if a child is
able differentiate
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able to differentiate
 what is wrong and what is correct at their younger age,
then
 they can able to overcome the tough situation at their old age. Another reason why I agree with is, these days both the
partens
something determined in relation to something that includes it
portions
patients
patterns
 are working and they are not having proper
time
 to be with their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
. They are taking
this
 as
advantage
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an advantage
advantages
 and using those
time
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times
 in playing.
This
 will increase their ability to play multiple sports apart
form
a giver or sender
from
 the one they are involved during their schools. For instant, if a child is
paying
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
basket ball
a game played on a court by two opposing teams of 5 players; points are scored by throwing the ball through an elevated horizontal hoop
basketball
 in school, during his leisure
time
 at
home he
Accept comma addition
home, he
 may
engae
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
engage
 in playing cricket, which is
make
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making
 him well versed in both the sports.
On the other hand
, if
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 are not using the free
time
 in
proper way
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a proper way
the proper way
, it may lead to a serious
problems
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problem
 to the family and to the society. So
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
children's
needs
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need
 to be educated by their parents to know what to do and what not to do.
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