Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree

countries those

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Those countries

Countries those

who

are rich always help

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are rich always helping

are rich always help

other countries that are poor with

monetary

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money

,

although

it is not adequate to solve their problem with poverty. Some believe that poor countries required not only financial help but

also

other types of aid

such

as education and health.

This

essay will discuss why all types of help are crucial for developing countries to survive. On the one hand, education and health are the backbone of a healthy society.

In other words

,

with out

in absence of

without

good education

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a good education

, people in a country could not learn good things.

consequently they

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Consequently, they

Consequently they

can gain good knowledge and compete with other talents in

this

world.

Further

and even more importantly, staying healthy is an undeniable thing that

help

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helps

them to live long and to strive for their family for their bread. So without good health, a country could not be succeeded in the long term.

For instance

, United Nations

often helping

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often help

are often helping

the destitute countries of Africa in order to stay them healthy and fit.

On the other hand

, monetary benefits are

also

a vital thing for poor countries to cope with the situations that are so deteriorated. In detail, some countries are often facing catastrophes in the form of flood, volcanic eruption etc.

As a result

, they may lose their civilians as well as their belongings.

Also there

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Also, there

is

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are

a chance forfeiting infrastructures that are so valuable for the economy of a nation. So helping with money is

also

inevitable for some countries to withstand in

this

globe.

For example

, Kerala had faced a

siviere

intensely or extremely bad or unpleasant in degree or quality

severe

flood in the previous year and lost a plethora of roads, houses etc. Japan helped Kerala with a huge amount in order to

re built

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rebuild

rebuilt

. In conclusion, both monetary and

unmonetary

benefits are often required for some countries. So it is the duty of

developed

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developing

countries to help others in their worse situations. So I am agreeing that both money and physical aid needed for poorer countries to survive.