You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbor has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain what the problem is Explain why it is disturbing you so much Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

Dear sir, I am writing to let you know that I am totally annoyed with the new neighbour who has been started to live near to my apartment since December. Let me explain my situation. As you know, I have a family of 3 including my younger daughter, who is just 6 months old. The problem is that

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my new neighbour is creating so many problems, including, plays music loudly at night on a regular basis.

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creates a lot of nuisance to us.

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, my daughter is often crying after hearing the loud noise. Would you please do the needful to rectify

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issue as soon as possible

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So that we can live there peacefully. Apart from that we are enjoying staying here

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because

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a captivating ambience and all the amenities are wonderful too. I suggest you

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please allow us to move to the apartment near to the river or leave that man from there. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John.