In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

In some areas in
US
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the US
, for teenagers to be outdoors late in the nights, they need to be accompanied by an adult. While some may argue that
such
restrictions are invading their personal freedom, I feel it is correct to impose
such
curfews. Over the past few years, we have seen a dramatic increase in the crime rates, especially in some areas of the US. The recent incident of a drug trafficker killing several tourists and locals in Virginia while trying to escape from the Police stands testimony to that fact. A deeper look at
all
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all, such
such
incidents shows us a clear trend that most of
such
crimes happen during the
night
times. I believe that criminals choose to operate during
night
times because there will be less people who might interrupt them. The cities
going
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are going
into sleep mode with very less people to notice their crimes make them choose the
night
times for their notorious activities. While the above reasons make the
night
time a perfect fit for criminals, the same reasons make it extremely dangerous for common people, especially teenagers, to venture out during
night
times. In case of any untoward incident, teenagers can't even shout for help from other people as there won't be many people out at that time to help. One of my friend's
teenager
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
son
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sons
was attacked by a mob while he was returning from a late
night
birthday party. The mob was under the heavy influence of alcohol and they suddenly attacked my friend's son. Considering all these dangers that are present during
night
times and the fact that not all teenagers are mature enough to deal with those difficult situations, it is always advisable for an adult to accompany
teeangers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
dangerous
during
night
times.
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  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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