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some people believe money is the best gift for the teenagers,while other do not support it.Discuss both the views and give your opinon.

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In today's modern world, where everything is changing, tackling with teenagers has become a
herculean
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Herculean
 task.People are more concern about
thier
of them or themselves
their
 children and they do take care about everything.Even the kind of gifts they
recieves
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
 during some parties or other
occassions
something you have to do
occasions
.
some
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Some
 people believe that
money
 as a
gift
 is a
best
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good
 thing to give to the adolescence.
However
, some are of opposite views.
This
 essay delves the issue
,
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,
will examine both the sides and
then
 come to the conclusion. On the one hand
,
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,
masses
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the masses
 believe that
,
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,
cash is the best
gift
 given to
the young
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younger
 children as there are multifarious advantages of it.
First
,
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,
it helps them to become more responsible and confident.As they will learn the
money
 management skills and spend the
money
 wisely.
Second
,
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,
they can save
this
money
 in
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 piggy banks and use it later, which
further
 develop the
money
 saving skills in them.
Third
,
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,
it makes younger people self-
sufficent
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sufficient, hence
sufficient hence
hence
 they do not ask
money
 from
thier
of them or themselves
their
 parents
On the other hand
, some individuals think that giving currency as a
gift
 can spoil the child.As they can use
this
money
 in the wrong
ways
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ways, such
such
 as smoking, alcoholism etc.They
further
 argue that, exposure to
money
this
 age can divert them
o
in the direction of
to
or
 earn
money
 rather than studies,
consequently
,
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,
ruin
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ruins
thier
of them or themselves
their
 career
.
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.
 In compendium
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,
I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 that,
although
,
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,
there are various negatives of
this
 trend.But
,
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,
gifting
money
 as a
gift can
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gift, can
 make teenagers more efficient and ready to tackle
thier
of them or themselves
their
 future.
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