International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so many countries open their doors to tourists. So the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, more and more people like to travel and explore different countries and their
cultures
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culture
.
This
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might be due to
cost
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the cost
of travel is much cheaper than earlier. There are many pros and cons on countries due to increase in number of tourists.
This
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essay will discuss both the effects in detail and explain why the advantages on rise in
tourism
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outweighs the disadvantages.
To begin
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with, there are
lot
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lots
of advantages
from
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of
tourism
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.
Firstly
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, it provides employment opportunities to the local people. Many industries purely depend on the
tourism
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like local transportation, working as a guide at historical places, hotel industries.
In other words
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, it contributes to the development of a country.
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to that, it
showcase
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showcases
the local culture to the different countries and showcase their country in international market.
On the other hand
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, the greatest disadvantages of the
tourism
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is effect on local people.
For example
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,
last
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year in Shimla, there was
huge crisis
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a huge crisis
for
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of
water. Local people couldn't find water to drink or cook because most of the water was used by big hotel for their guests.
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to the due to increase in number of people it will be difficult to maintain the cleanliness of the place and most of the historical places are getting
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
of
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by
this
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To conclude,
eventhough
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even though
there are few side effects of increase in number of people due to
tourism
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, it definitely comes with
lot
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lots
a lot
of benefits to the local people as well on the
whole to country
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whole country
. So government should encourage and attract more tourists and open their doors to them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • local businesses
  • job creation
  • cultural understanding
  • stereotypes
  • global connections
  • infrastructure
  • public transportation
  • environmental degradation
  • pollution
  • deforestation
  • wildlife habitats
  • commercialization
  • cultural identity
  • overcrowding
  • quality of life
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