Some people believe that there is a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think this trend as positive or negative development?

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At
current juncture
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the current juncture
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travelling by
air
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is a major means to move around, chosen by many. But many people argue that
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trend will revert and
the
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the amount
number
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of
air
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travel
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in the future will be reduced
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As per me it is an unfavourable development because of multiple reasons.
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and
formost
ranking above all others
foremost
, dip in
air
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travel
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rate could lead to increase in the travelling time.
Air
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travel
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is the fastest means of transport and the commuters opting for other means of travelling can cause profound time lose to them. As it is
told
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
said
that time is money, it can adversely affect
world economy
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world economies
the world economy
.
For instance
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, to
travel
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from Mumbai to Dubai by
air
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,
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it takes only 4 hrs
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where as by other means like a ship takes 24 hrs and for a high profile businessman each extra minute he spend in long journey will be causing a humongous lose of money
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Furthermore
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,
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people choosing other means
for
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of
to
travel
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can adversely affect
aviation
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industry. Around the world
aviation
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is a billion dollar business, employing millions directly and indirectly
.
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Reduction in
number
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of passengers will force flight companies to reduce the
number
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of flights operated by them in turn cause job loss associated with them and can have
insidious effect
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an insidious effect
insidious effects
on profit of the company.
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, a recent study conducted by
Indian
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the Indian aviation ministry
aviation
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ministry showed that Indian
aviation
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industry is
on
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in
a turmoil as the
number
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of
air
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passengers in the country drastically reduced in the
last
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couple of years
as a result
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of
overall global economic slowdown
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the overall global economic slowdown
. In converse
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people choosing other means of transport can reduce
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air fare
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the air fare
air fares
to a great extend. If the
number
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of travellers
are reducing
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is reducing
gradually, flight company may sell tickets at a discount rate in order to attract more customers.
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will make
air
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tickets affordable even to low income earners.
For instance
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, in
tourist
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the tourist
off seasons
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it is quite common among many flight companies selling
ticket
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tickets
at a discounted rate. To conclude, decline in the
number
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of passengers is detrimental to
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aviation industry
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the aviation industry
. Choosing other means of transport
is
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are
more time-consuming to passengers. So considering both these reasons, the reduction in
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number
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the number
of
air
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passengers is a negative development.
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