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Cultures all around world have become more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative?

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There is no doubt that cultures have always been responsible for togetherness of individuals. There are a lot of people who believe cultures are more alike around the globe than before. I completely agree with
this
 statement and I will support my view with examples.
First
 and Foremost, Globalisation should be considered as the biggest reason behind brining all the civilizations together. Nowadays, People have moved out of their country in order to settle in different part of the world brining in a little
culture
 of their own.
For instance
, a person of Indian origin moves to the USA indulging himself in their festivals and occasions.
This
 is because people are more interested in knowing other cultures and welcome others with open hearts.
As a result
, the world has become one big civilization and makes it easier for people to move and immigrate in a foreign country.
However
, some people would argue that because of it, we are losing the originality of one's
culture
.
For Example
, Few of the Indian festivals
such
 as Diwali and Holi are not being celebrated with
such
 enthusiasm in the contemporary era. It is more because of the individuals who have moved out of their home town and often don't come back to celebrate festivals.
Therefore
, Collaborating their
culture
 with others is individuals decision not a forced one. In my view,
although
 some people do believe their
culture
 is losing its existence. I think that we are cultivating new cultures and making
this
 world a better place for future generations.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural homogenization
  • globalization
  • mass media
  • multinational corporations
  • consumer culture
  • migration
  • global community
  • international understanding
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • Western cultures
  • predominant
  • overshadowing
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