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Band 2.5

A letter to your friend for collage or getting a job

#friend #collage #job
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Dear John How have you been?It’s a long time we
didn’t seen
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haven’t seen
didn’t see
have not seen
did not see
weren’t seeing
were not seeing
 each other.When I got your a letter
actually I
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Actually, I
Actually I
 surprised.But I’m so excited because I
be
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am
 able to help you.
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Therefore please
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Therefore, please
listen
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Listen
 to me very carefully.As you know it the collages are
accept
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accepting
 the student for in
certain term
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a certain term
certain terms
. And if you want to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 to
collage
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 you must prepare your all files before
deadline
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the deadline
. That’s mean You will have collected documents before in
this
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 end of the month.But in my opinion you won’t be happy in
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collage
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
.The
collage
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 its not suitable for you.You don’t like doing homework or passing time in
library
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the library
libraries
. The getting a job
instead
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 of the
collage
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 it’s perfect for you.You are
willing person
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a willing person
 to helping people or creating
some thing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
 different from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 person.
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Also you
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Also, you
 know your
this
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 side.Have you a dream about the what you want or what is make happy to you.Just think about that.And
also
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 you can save money when you are working.
Actually I
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Actually, I
 have one suggestion for you.When we are young you played guitar.So you should
improves
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improve
 your
this
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 ability.Maybe you can find job in cafes or
bars near to
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bars near
 your house.I support you for
this
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 affair.Just try it.You deserve to be happy and if you need any
help please
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help, please
 contact to with me. Warm Wishes.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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