It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the voluntary work.

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Most of the students skip a year after their high school and before university for some sort of humanitarian deeds in less developed countries. These days, it is a common practice

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for

students to do work voluntarily,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

in underdeveloped countries. There are some advantages and disadvantages to take a gap year between education for

volunatrily

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volunteer

voluntarily

voluntary

work.

First advantage

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The first advantage

is that, it is a positive approach towards humanity.

Second

, it can provide assistance to needy people around the world.

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contrast, there are disadvantages too.

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the top most, a year gap can be

trouble-some

difficult to deal with

troublesome

for some students in

future

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the future

. Because, there would be a difference in age and education.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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2 paragraphs

110 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the voluntary work.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

in many countries today, if people want to find a job , they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to edcuate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.