Some people think that children benefit from the TV and they should spend much time on it, but others support that children should not watch TV. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people
supports
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support
have supported
are supporting
that, the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are having advantages from the
TV
and they should watch it, but others think that
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
should not spend
time
on
TV
. There are some both pros and cons about these views. I agree that
,
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,
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
have
to be know
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to know
known
how to manage
time
and
this
essay will discuss the both sides of
argument
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the argument
an argument
. On the one hand, the specific benefits about spending
time
on
TV
are generally related
with
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to
information and
knowladge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
.
For example
, some
reserchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
researches
research
showns
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
shown
shows
sense
that, the most affective
way
to
lear
gain knowledge or skills
learn
a new language is to watch
TV
series on the
TV
in that
languages
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language
which is
wanted
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wanting
to learn.
Moreover
, sometimes the
TV
series are might be useful even in own language to practicing grammar and refreshing out to vocabulary. As a consequence,
reserchers
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
which
is supporting
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are supported
are supporting
to watch
Tv
have got strong evidences about
good effects
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the good effects
of watching
TV
.
However
,
there
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There
are some extremely hazardous cons about spending a lot of
time
on
TV
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
a lot of supporters which are supporting
to
being one more than one
two
TV
has to be banned for
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
. The main and the most efficient reason for
this
view is the side effects
about
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on
childrens
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children's
health and growing process. To illustrate that, there are some diseases which
are causesome
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cause some
are cause some
are caused some
harmful
consequneces
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
such
as, epilepsy. These kind of diseases may injure or even kill. The best
way
to protect children is
limit
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limited
to the
time
and
then
close to the device.
Otherwise
, it may become a kind of
addiciton which
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addiction, which
addiction which
is will be a waste of
time
for that
child
. These are extremely high prices to pay for a moment of fun. In conclusion, spending a lot of
time
might be bad for
childrens future
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the child's future
child's future
a child's future
children future
children's future
. In my opinion, the most accurate
way
to solve
this
problem is having a balanced routine between both sides and limit the
time
in spending
time
on
TV
.
Although
, one day
child
wants to watch more
TV
, parents which is
resposible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
on
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for
their
child
have to be
diciplined
obeying the rules
disciplined
and strict on their routine to protect their
child
in
a
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an
accurate
way
.
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