Some people believe that Arts (such as painting and music) do not improves people’ life and, therefore, government should not spent money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by a fraction of the masses that activities
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as music and painting have added nil value in people’s standard of living and so the
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should stop allocating their budget on it. I completely agree with
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notion since there are other immediate projects which require significant funding and have a greater impact on people’s l
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To embark on, information technology is the need of an hour, and by investing in
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sector the
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can
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improve it. Needless to say that due to technological advancement people’s life change a lot and they become more modernized. Task and duties which require significant time and effort, now due to information technology can be done with ease and convenience.
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, electronic equipment
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as laptops, laser printer, and mobile phones have increased workers' productivity.
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, if the
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puts
its investment in Arts and craft, it would have no output o
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it and have limited benefits to certain individuals. Another reason why the
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should not invest in Artwork is that it provides limited benefits to the state.
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is because the cost to build a museum is in million d
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dollars, but
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, the revenue which earns
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of
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investment is fairly low. Sometimes the
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cannot recover its initial cost from certain art events. London Museum,
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, has an annual expenditure of one billion dollars,
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, in turn, generates only 500 million dollars every year, which evidently a loss-making project for the
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.
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, if the
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can invest in building a new industry, it would be a lucrative investment for them and
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has an economic benefit to the
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. In conclusion, it is suggested by some people that arts activities are useless and have limited value and the
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should stop spending in
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sector. While I completely support their view, I believe o
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any of various alternatives; some other
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important sector science and technology has changed p
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a person's life
person's life
peoples' life
a lot and
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require huge funding.
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