Some people think that large sporting international events could cause problems to the hosting country and it is not worth hosting such events. Do you agree or disagree.

There is a common myth that large sporting international events cause problems for the organisers and it is not worth hosting
such
events. In
this
essay, we will try to explore what are the advantages and disadvantages of hosting
such
events, and base our opinion on whether
this
myth is true if the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. There are many problems associated with holding
such
events, the
first
and foremost is the costs associated with holding
such
events. The hosting country has to provide boarding and lodging facilities to the guest teams.
Similarly
, huge number of sporting fans
also
arrive to watch the event and
this
may require building new infrastructure
such
as hotels, roads etc. The influx of the large number of people creates many problems
such
as traffic problems for the locals, Law and order problems as we seen in recent football tournaments that fans of opposing teams fight with each other inside the stadiums as well as on the roads which creates chaos in the hosting city. The positive impacts or advantages includes a boost in tourism for the hosting country.
This
helps in bringing foreign exchange as people come from all over the world to attend these events, and they use local services
such
as hotels, transport and do shopping in the local markets and all of
this
creates a positive economic impact for the host nation. These events are
also
seen as a source of pride for the hosting nation and create interest in the youth towards sports.
This
brief comparison of the pros and cons of holding international sporting events suggests that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and the myth that these events cause problems and these events are not worth hosting in not true. I strongly believe that these events should organise as they have a positive social and economic impact on the host country.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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