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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you knowledge or experience.

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The temperature of planet earth has changed rapidly over the past hundred years or so and some argue that we should not spend our money and energy to fight it but find means to adapt to
this
 change.
This
 essay disagrees with
this
 view due to several reasons as we shall see. The
first
 and foremost reason why we should stop or try to reduce the pace of global warming is that it is directly affecting our lives and it may prove to be an existential threat to the entire human race.
For instance
, the melting of polar ice caps will increase the sea levels around the world and many coastal cities will be submerged.
Moreover
, the change in weather patterns, and the gradual rise in degrees is having an adverse impact on the food production as well. Sitting idle and finding ways to adapt to it will result in its pace is going unchecked and it will accelerate and magnify the problems mentioned earlier. Another reason why maximum efforts on a global scale is needed to fight
this
 danger is its effect on the health and wellness of living beings on earth. The steps that are required to stop or slow down global warming have the results of reducing pollution, and improving air quality which is a major concern for the residents of a number of big cities.
For example
, Lahore and New Dehli. In conclusion It is important to allocate maximum resources to fight global warming on every level for the future of
next
 generations depend on it and finding alternative solutions to co- exist with it will never prove to be a long term solution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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