Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Language barriers have been a debatable topic since time immemorial. Some people that it causes difficulties for people in another territory while others think
otherwise
. Immigrants usually experience issues when they trade and when they try to learn the new languages in the countries they migrated to and I fully support
this
fact. Admittedly, those who believe that new entrants to country do not face challenges
genuinely believe
Suggestion
genuinely believing
this
because migration is very easy these days. In order words, the ease of migration has made many families move across countries to find a new life but
this
movement comes at a cost.
For example
, having to live in a place where know one loves you.
This
can cause many troubles and sometimes tension leading to loss of loved ones and should
therefore
be avoided.
Nevertheless
, others say that migrants face challenges in the new areas where they live for the following reasons.
First
, trading is difficult.
This
means that
such
persons can be easily cheated in their business dealings because they do not understand the new language.
For instance
,
such
people tend to pay more than necessary for cheap goods because of ignorance of the ways of communicating which is different from the system in their home countries.
This
leads to bigger problems because they will quickly run out of cash.
Secondly
, the new migrants face much stress in learning the new language.
This
is because they need to
first
find someone willing to teach them, until
then
, they remain a laughing stock to their new neighbours.
This
can be very frustrating to
new comers
any new participant in some activity
newcomers
. In conclusion,
although
the
ease
Suggestion
easiest
to change countries is easier these days, I strongly agree that the challenges faced after
such
decisions are traumatizing.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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