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Todays children are living under more pressure from the society than the children in the past. To what extent do you agree or diagree give your opinion.

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Nowadays, children need to learn a great number of lessons, and they have lots of tasks to finish.
As a result
, they should work hard with having no time for entertainment. From my point of view, I am in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of that children have taken more
pressure
 from the
society
 than they used to do. There are two reasons accounting for the changes that children have been living under more
pressure
.
Firstly
, the
society
 is now in fast development, children are usually asked by their parents to work hard so that they could keep pace of the fast
deveiopment
Suggestion
developing
development
 world.
Consequently
, they devote themselves to study and
as a result
 of which they have no time to play.
On the other hand
, adults tend to focus more on personal success. As they do hope that their children become successful in their life, they commonly ask their children to compete with each other.
In addition
, teachers at school usually have a list related to children`s grade in every subject, which have made children under huge
pressure
. Compared to the past times, the
society
 had not changed a lot
,
Accept space
,
and the pace of the
society
 was slow. Children in the times only need to go to school and finish their lessons. Apart from
this
, they could enjoy their personal time because there were not much competition. To summarise, children have to do more and more things than they used to have. It is obvious that they have been living under more
pressure
 due to the fast development
wolrd
everything that exists anywhere
world
award
worlds
.When it comes to me, I think parents should help their children balance their life,
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