Some people think that activities during the free time should be planned while others disagree. Discuss both sides and include examples and relevant data from your own experience.
Some people like to
plan
activities, even for free time
, whereas some others has opposing idea. In my opinion, free time
should not plan
and it is better people feel free and relax during leisure time
and do whatever they want. This
essay will argue two opposing ideas, plus my experience.
On the one hand, planning help people to manage their time
and money, even during leisure time
. Some people feel absurdity
without a Suggestion
the absurdity
plan
. In some way, have a schedule give them the sense
of victory and help them to prevent wasting time
and enjoy each minute of their life. For instance
, planning on a short trip during spare time
has many advantages for people who are traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
such
as, managing time
and money, knowing the timetable of public vehicles, and the location of places you want to visit. So, although
, a schedule can facilitate the life, but sometimes it can be boring.
On the other hand
, have a free day
without a plan
with emancipation has a positive effect on our spirit. As we work like a robot all the day
, the stress and pressure of life and work effect on our health. However
, having an unplanned day
induce the sense
of freedom to us. According to psychologies, the sense
of freedom can recover and refresh our body and mind. For example
, playing music, camping in the nature and spending time
with friends make positive feel. So, it is true that apparently a day
without a plan
is like losing time
, but mentally relaxation and unleash sense
cannot replace with any plan
.
To sum up, I totally believe that leisure time
without a plan
not only does not caused emptiness feeling, it also
makes a sense
of calm. Have a day
without control and with the best will in the world has work
like a medicine for the spirit.Suggestion
worked
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